In the ending of the first chapter, I made a small mistake in terms of Lowly's character. I had written down that she runs out of her room looking for a stallion to have intercourse with. This was something that didn't really occur to me at the time, but because of Lowly's meek side(thanks to Lord Armor) she would never go out of her way to look for sex. She is a submissive maid that follows orders, not give them or try to force herself onto anyone. Oops!

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